For small businesses — in fact, even for large ones — free publicity can be a golden ticket to name recognition, increased web site traffic, and more sales. But to get it, you have to make nice with journalists.
Take a look at this article from Jakob Nielsen that’s packed with really great tips on how to make the most of your web sites’s PR area. Don’t have a PR area? Read the article to find out why you should.
Lowepro is a company that makes camera cases. This is the tag that was attached to one of their products. Unfortunately, in the smaller text, they got their name right in every language except English. Whoops! Misspelling your own company name is a sure way to damage your credibility — and your brand.
Besides the terrible image quality (my fault — no proper camera nearby), what’s wrong with this ad for a Clarins free gift promotion at Sears?
While it is nice that the promotion allows you to choose one of four different skin-care sets, the phrase “right to choose” is entirely inappropriate here.
Why? It’s loaded language. It’s a phrase that — like it or not — references a woman’s right to choose to have an abortion. That thought will enter the mind of almost every person who reads the ad. Perhaps no one told the ad writers at Sears that abortion isn’t an issue they should allude to in their copy.
I’m all for cheeky word play and clever pop-culture referencing. Done well, it can make an ad for a dull product sparkle. But make sure the cultural reference you make is appropriate, unless you’re specifically trying to stir up controversy.
I caught this headline on Reuter’s today:
Retailers’ holiday sales plummet 4 percent
Now, I’m sure that a 4 percent drop in sales is painful for retailers in these tough economic times. But sales can’t “plummet” 4 percent. Dip, drop, fall, slump, sure. But to plummet is “to drop sharply and abruptly” (Merriam-Webster), and 4 percent is just not that sharp a drop.
I’ve already admonished Translink once for not living up to the excellent punctuation standards set by the signage on the New York Subway.
But I simply couldn’t let this, from the “etiquette” section on their web site, go without comment.
Seats closest to the doors are designated for persons with disability and seniors, your courtesy in offering these seats to others is appreciated.
Aside from the fact that the phrasing makes it sound like the seats are for persons with disability and persons with seniors, that’s one nasty comma splice. Two sentences joined together like that require a semi-colon; a comma simply won’t do.
I posted a new page today with some tips for anyone who wants to increase traffic to their web site without an expensive and confusing “search engine optimization package” and without any black magic.
When editing corporate copy, I see a lot of simple mistakes that end up making the business sound pretty goofy. Here’s a typical example of a common mistake:
Suites have newly renovated bathrooms with granite counter tops and hairdryers.
The granite counter tops sound great, but those granite hairdryers are probably pretty heavy…
The problem here is that the adjective (granite) looks like it’s modifying both nouns (counter tops and hairdryers). The simplest way to solve this problem is to switch the sentence around:
Suites have newly renovated bathrooms with hairdryers and granite counter tops.
Are you scaring potential customers away by unwittingly threatening them with extra-heavy small appliances? A good editor can save you from embarrassing mistakes that cost you customers and leads.
I’ve said it before: I understand that the Internet is not a medium known for its focus on grammatical correctness. Still, you’d think a site claiming to offer job opportunities for freelance writers might try a little harder than most. That’s why this is a little distressing:
I can almost forgive the wonky capitalization and inconsistent use of end punctuation. But a question with no question mark and a contraction with no apostrophe are really beyond reproach — never mind the missing hyphen.
This ad could have benefited from a once-over by a “natural born” editor. If you’re spending money on advertising, it only makes sense to invest in a quick proof-read to make sure you’re not embarrassed — or even driving potential customers away.
I was walking home the other day and passed a dry cleaning shop called “Mia Dry Cleaning.” Now, Mia is a perfectly fine name for a dry cleaning shop. But when they write their name in all caps on the awning, you don’t read it as Mia. What you see is:
MIA Dry Cleaning
I don’t know about you, but that’s not the place I’d choose to take my most expensive shirts…
Yahoo! News: Entertainment News – Trump to buy McMahon’s home, let him leave there (AP)
Um, let him *leave* there? Surely enough, clicking through to the story reveals that, in fact, Trump will let McMahon *live* there (which is essentially the opposite of leaving).